His parents had told him never to talk to strangers, so he and the man walked together in silence. The woods were very dark.

Steve Calvert is a writer from the UK. His website can be found at http://www.steve-calvert.co.uk

Very creepy and painfully ironic. Well done.

3. scott harding
10/09/2009 10:36 am

I thought ’24 words? ive got read this’ not expecting much…….VERY good! few words create a powerful, sickening image. well done steve.
scott

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5. Pat Brien
07/01/2010 05:35 am

That is superb. Really good. I’ll try one:

If she had killed him at the start, it would be over now. Seduction can lead to terrible things. Like marriage.

OK, you win :-0

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